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Triptych - Ember's Prelude

This, again, I am not happy with. In contrast to Emma's story, I'm trying for a more sing-song, fairytale feel, which I'm not sure I obtained. This requires heavy edits, and is totally unfinished, but it's a starting point. Read more...Collapse )

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Triptych - Emma's prelude (continued).

I don't like this at all. I didn't like the last bit, either. It's too sloppy, and it's too brief. But, it's a starting point. At this stage I guess I'm trying to get the ideas and the flow of the story out, and I can polish it later. I need to write, not to get everything correct, if that makes sense.Read more...Collapse )

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Triptych - Emma's Prelude

A rough draft of one of the prelude options I'm thinking of, this one focussing on "Our Heroine", Emma. Read more...Collapse )

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Triptych - Notes

Triptych - Notes

http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=triptych

I'm going to try to get back into the writing thing by getting started on writing a story under the working title of "Triptych". Read more...Collapse )

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Writing progress

I'm currently trying to get my head around "Into the Fire". There are bits there that I don't like, and it's holding me up. I'm thinking I'm going to bash out a third episode, just to get *something* written, and go back and clean it up later. On a similar note, I've printed out all of what I've done so far, and will be editing the hell out of it.

I don't know what it is, but I've always found it easier to edit things on paper than on a screen.

"A Modern Lady's Guide..." is currently on hold until I get this "Into the Fire" stuff sorted. It's been niggling at me, you see, and I need to get it done.

The thing that I find really hard about writing is producing stuff that I know isn't up to the standard I want it to be. I need to learn that I still need to write it, and fix it up later.
Part One - Making a Monster

Chapter One - Creator, Destroyer (cont.) Read more...Collapse )

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"Into the Fire" - The Old Witch Stones in the Palmer’s woods
Rough draft, just for the hell of it. Read more...Collapse )

"Into the Fire", the first bit

"Into the Fire", Introduction, Part 1, rough draft. Read more...Collapse )
Part One - Making a Monster

Chapter One - Creator, Destroyer Read more...Collapse )